Interesting description/ inspiration- young + old Great choices of images for parallel they work well.Colour is a real strength here- vibrant party atmosphere contrasted with black and white images for the second half. Not sure the contrapuntal works- gets something of a reaction but perhaps not enough of a jump ( and with old people smiling could even suggest a different version of parallel?)
My Feedback: I think that my video had a good concept with the colour scheme and however, I do agree on the fact that the black and white pictures of the old people could be interrupted to being parallel which is why I focused more on the colour scheme than the expressions of the old people.
LR:
- Learner response: compare your video against your evaluation of the top three videos in the class. Who did you think was best and why? How could you have improved your own video?
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